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Something special for your birthday...


You open your gift but what do you see?
Some little note with ink scribed in green

                          It reads 'to fly is such a beautiful thing'
                          ...to soar through the skies and hear the angels sing'


You read the note aloud and hear an echoing chime
For the note was a spell of something beautifully sublime
A light spouts fourth from the blades of your back
Forming magnificent wings; feathers white and black
You rise to the far edges of the sunlit skies
And smile at the world while in effortless flight
Enjoy your gift as you glide down to the beach
And see wings reflected in the dew that's the sea
©2009 ~Adonael
:iconadonael:

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I was reading a reply from :iconstuk-in-reality: and a huge inspiration feed so I decided to write this for her birthday. It's not exactly perfect but it's something :)

Happy Birthday :iconstuk-in-reality:

They arn't real wings but they come pretty damn close :D

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:iconstuk-in-reality:
:wow: omg, this is beautiful! I'm a complete sucker for poetry, and I copletely adore this ^_^ The next best thing to actually having my superpower of flight ;)
Thankyou so so much! This is maybe one of my favourite birthday presents <33 I really love it :hug: x

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"It's breaking up and getting far away
I used to know what I wanted to say" - British Sea Power


I Miss You, I Really Truly Do ... No Ones Managed To Love Me Like You </3

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:iconadonael:
You're most welcome milady <3 :hug:

It was a pleasure and I just thought it suited our last conversation rather nicely :D
Nice to know you're a sucker for poetry :P

Thankyou for the kind words :)

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Literature is inspired by madness but written by reason
:iconstuk-in-reality:
:heart: yeah it definetly suits it very well (: Great choice of words ^_^
I looove poetry, I'm just not very good at writing it! You're like officially the first person to write me a poem :P Well except for the whole Valentines day "Roses are red, Violets are blue" crap haha but that barely counts ... a monkey could rhyme that!!
Thanks again <3 x

--
"It's breaking up and getting far away
I used to know what I wanted to say" - British Sea Power


I Miss You, I Really Truly Do ... No Ones Managed To Love Me Like You </3

[link] :gallery:
:iconadonael:
Thanks again for the kind words milady :)

I'm going to be proud of that title :P being your first poet.

Yeah, valentines ';poetry' is too cheesy and predictable so I can relate to that. That day is too superficial now

You're welcome by the by <3 x

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Literature is inspired by madness but written by reason
:iconvickstahs:
hmms...

"..note aloud and hear [an] echoing chime"

otherwise, lovely poetry.

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I tried pursuing Happiness. Happiness sought a restraining order.

//AHWY4L//
:iconadonael:
Thankyou

I also corrected the little mistake you pointed out...

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Literature is inspired by madness but written by reason
:iconthosedarnelves:
Birthdays are always so much fun :D Well... that is... until you get... OLD XD

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In the end, everything will be okay. If it isn't okay-it isn't the end.
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return" <3
:iconadonael:
I think you should cherish every birthday...even if you're getting old and wrinkly in the process :P

But I guess youth should be cherished even more so yeah, I see your point :D

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Literature is inspired by madness but written by reason
:iconthosedarnelves:
Well I agree with you, but I know some of my family members that would rather forget their birthday all together. :D

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In the end, everything will be okay. If it isn't okay-it isn't the end.
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"The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return" <3

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