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At the bus stop, jacket locked and dropped
Over my thighs
Like rain – skies tearing up
Ready for another blur and b-b-b-blurting out session

Dull midnight highwayman pulls over.


The origami doors fold out
To take me in
And after banter with the bus driver,
Double-decker sh-sh-sh-shakes
Itself awake
Like tea leaves.

The aisle is coated
In Metro and rain d-d-d-drops d-d-d-dropping
Atop heads and webs
And I'm greeted by mistakes
Loose change
And the braveheart mum who weans
Her baby off the idea that he'll ever
Catch a taxi.

Suprisingly
The Queen isn't
Smiling
Magnificently
In their eyes
Because they're blinded
By business of
Not
Being royalty
Or V.I.P
Or Someone.

And God is at the back,
Trying to s-s-s-speak,
But people put
A muzzle on
Him years ago,
Choosing to flow
Like the d-d-d-downpour
Forward -- Forward -- Forward
Without smelling roses.

There's no time for church
While the sky sh-sh-sh-sheds itself
D-d-d-damp and due
For more dew
Through and through
And the Calpol is almost out – the baby
Can't get ill again
Cos common folk c-c-c-can't
Afford to.

So they sh-sh-sh-shake
Rain off like umbrellas
Telling windows
Soon to be
Past
Condensate
Mirrors
That hope
Has gone
Monorail.

And all their movements
Are nothing but s-s-s-stutters.
Meh...I don't know

Incidentally, inspiration came whilst seated on a bus...
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Niky28's avatar
while i was reading this i really felt that i was sitting on a bus. xD well done recreating the whole travelling by bus feeling :P and i am only noticing it now, so please don't hate me for that, but you end almost every poem of yours with one or two lines max. and i'm starting to feel that that's a signature of yours. maybe if i would read a few poems with no clues who written which one, maybe, just maybe but i think i would recognize your poem by the ending. that's good, right? xD

anyways, well done, keep up the good job! :)